Comparisons of Toaster Ovens
37. Cuisinart TOB-40N vs Oster TSSTTVMNDG-SHP-2: Medium or Large
The contest between the Cuisinart TOB-40N Custom Classic Toaster Oven Broiler and the Oster TSSTTVMNDG-SHP-2 Digital Convection Toaster Oven was a close one. The Oster edged it out narrowly in the end, but not just because it has a higher price.
44. Hamilton Beach 31401 Countertop vs Oster TSSTTVMNDG-SHP-2 Toaster Oven: Small or Large
The Hamilton did earn a small victory in toasting bread, though, and the score was quite impressive. We believe the Oster could’ve scored higher if its toast presets were designed with better toasting time.
46. Breville BOV450XL vs Ninja Foodi XL Pro: Best Small vs Best Large
These two toaster ovens don’t differ much in terms of build quality. However, the small Breville lacks too many features, especially interior-wise, compared to the large Ninja. As a result, the Ninja far surpasses the Breville regarding design and usability.
The same can be said about their cooking performance. When it comes to roasting a whole chicken, the benefits of having a strong convection system pulled the Ninja way ahead. The Ninja further solidifies its victory with its air fryer basket for making fries compared to the Breville’s sheet pan.
Comments & Suggestions
The latter clause implies that price has to do with one machine winning the other, but that is not the case. The 'test' this article refers to marks and compares products based on functions and designs, excluding price since price isn't a permanent attribute.
Revise:
The Oster edged it out narrowly in the end, and as a result, retails at a higher price
By using an expression with a noun in it (earn a small victory), the writer unconsciously place emphasis, which also signals readers that this emphasis is to be elaborated. That is not the case here, so a simple verb (performed better) would suffice here.
Expressions like
- when it comes to
- the benefits
get in the way of the main point: the strong convection system pulls the Ninja way ahead.
Revise:
Having a strong convection system really pulled the Ninja way ahead when it roasted a whole chicken.
40. Oster TSSTTVMNDG-SHP-2 vs Hamilton Beach 31127D: Large or Medium
The Oster had a higher design score due to it having a convection system and an interior light. Its LCD allowed for more precise control than the Hamilton’s analog dials, but the oven’s buttons could be more responsive.
Using "the" gives the impression that the item that follows it has been already mentioned, and in this case, readers may mistake 'buttons' for 'LCD.'
Revise:
..., but the buttons right below it could be more responsive.